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A BIG THANKS TO :iconsoona15: FOR TAGGING ME, LOVE YOU SWEETHEART!!!! Sharo and Chino Glomp Icon  :kiss: revamp :kiss: revamp 

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1. Introduce yourself of course. Tell us a few interests; perhaps why you're here on Deviantart, or why you choose to write instead of draw (or both).

Ok, I'm late to EVERYTHING like homework, university deadlines, THIS and you know what I'm not gonna ramble, I am going to jump right in!
Hey, how's it going, name's Otakuu4lyphe if you couldn't tell by the name I'm an anime fan. Ironically I don't have any anime art. Hey I'm working on it! I just lack the conviction and all the fancy Photoshop and Photoshop skills. Plus I'm too lazy, sue me, writing is much easier to get my passion across. 

2. Hmmm, that is interesting. Now that the formalties are out of the way, what do you write? (Poetry, stories, etc.)

Poetry. Majority of them are labelled under songs and lyrics made to be read with a beat/vocal performance. I also do traditional and general poetry.

3. I see, I see. Well, so what do you like to write about? Go on, don't be shy about it. Nobody's judging you.

Non-rhymes, short poems, long poems, medium poems, Most of which are rhymes that don't come off as childish or as a nursery due to some of it being harsh, raw, fun, dark content. I delve into random topics and genres that are in different perspectives of unique individuals and can't really be classified and each has its own story, sometimes, and its rare, I write about my thoughts. I don't do this anymore. I  bore me.

That's why I wrote a poem about a villager whose best friend is a dragon who commits arson on their whole village and its about how they deal with this problem. That's why I have a poem about mediocrity. That's why I have a poem about a mischief girl whose ex brings his new girlfriend over to her house to sleepover. Yeah, and my latest poem is about two misanthropists who both came from peaceful ruling class backgrounds wanting to takeover a war torn country and succeed. Another war related poem I wrote was about a handicapped soldier hoping one day for his eager baby girl to follow in his footsteps and fight for her country like he did. The wife ain't having it. Do any of these interest you? Then welcome. If your answer is no. Welcome anyway, because this isn't even the surface!

4. I wasn't quite expecting that from you, and think that I thought I knew you. Ok then, how did you really get into writing?

Got a laptop for a present. Pressed my fingers on its keypad and-voila! Magic!....Or crap, depends on who you ask.

5. Oh, I can probably relate that. You talked about why, what, and how, so, when did you really start writing?

When I was a kid I had a poetry book like I use to write and compile my own poems in it at 9 years old. One of poems got published in my old school's magazine and I used to perform other famous poets' works in front of large audiences. Then I kinda lost the book and forgot about my achievements and focused on drawing. Due to failing at Photoshop and a bump on the head I decided BACK TO POETRY! And I decided to never let it go!^^ 

6. That long ago, really? Alright, one last little question, who got you into writing? Did you get inspired by an author, or maybe someone just got the idea into your head to write?

I'll be honest, I am completely blank on this one. 
7. Ok, ok. I suppose that's enough of 20 Questions. So why don't you go ahead and show us a paragraph or a few lines of a poem (but it's gotta be original for this, don't think I won't be watching!)

Roses are red
Violets are-

Blood is red
The sky is blue
put them together-
bleeding rain on cue.

I killed all the angels up in Heaven,
now they drip for you.
Dug a tunnel to the entrance of Hell
now all you demons make room
for the Queen.
Hit her till she's purple
the true colour of gloom.
And deflower her!
Deflower is such a nasty word
I prefer the term bloom.

Soak up the storm.
Tongues out-
Drink up all those with anemia.
Fill my cup up with more "red wine".
Let's have a toast to nation wide panic and hysteria.

This nightmare fuel isn't running out anytime soon.
My morbidity isn't putting you at ease.
but let me make it clear
that I don't care-
You chose to bring an umbrella
I chose to bathe in the blood of our enemies.

8. Ah, quite touching. I suppose that's all I can really say for this one dear writer within this art site. If you know any other writers, feel free to forc....erm..."politely ask" any other writes you know here, to give their hand at filling this thing out.

 Pikachu plz <I CHOOSE YOU!~<3 )






Writing Meme
Sooooooo.....never been tagged before first timer everyone Hoo Hoo hope I'm doing it right.

Fingers twitch-
an urge to pull on my leash?
They spotted us
because I strut dramatically 
while you march mechanically.
Both of us with the intent of showing off our power
but revealed our misanthropy
the jig is up,
cause calamity
sure fire away to get them moaning in agony.

Crawling on the battlefield
to sow the seeds of megalomania.
I can't even remember the last time
we were so reckless and happy.
Issue out hard labour
to work in our favour
get them slaving all day and night in the factory.

Look at my chessboard of idiots!
Defeats the whole purpose of the game:
there is no strategy.

Split them into two groups:
The disobedient
more attitude
the higher the altitude
so cheeky so crafty.
Think you can defy us
once I put you on a cliff: 
step on your fingers
till you no longer linger
will you also defy gravity?

Then there's the basic,
the incorrigible,
a little Stockholm syndrome
lock them in a box
eventually they'll call it home.
Nothing but toddlers, 
I tell them over the speaker to kill themselves
and a gunshot goes off after "Roger."

you always wanted to be a teacher.
Well this whole conquering thing is elementary.
Ancestors have been squandering this power
in exchange for peace every century.
Well not in this timeline,
make us raise our voice twice
and your homeland becomes a cemetery.
This seems like a bad idea.
Just thought I ought to let you know.
You're a nervous wreck
whenever you start cracking your fingers;
and my blood lust is starting to show.

Nip the nape of your neck like a vampire.
Ignore the stitches and your clean white attire.
Marie Antoinette syndrome has cleared
the dark locks I use to tug.
And now dry and empty
is your body:
a temple,
now home to bugs.

Mildew gathers,
spider webs woven.
My body answers to your command;
others call it rape
yet your legs spread wide open.

It is tradition for me
to act like a gentleman.
In your submission you were nothing but a tool.
It's tradition for everyone
to adore the Hero's journey-
a crowd favourite, yes
but underrated tis the Fool's.

You've never seen under this thick disguise.
But now that you've been unraveled like a spool.
Do you now acknowledge the fact that I'm a parasite?
Everyone else did,
everyone but you.

Because now you're not just a parasite,
you're a centipede's bite.
What goes through your left ear
comes out the right ear.
I take the fruits that bear your misery
and snake's venom,
I blend them.
Pour them in the best wine glasses
for all of us to share.

How can you stand watch and not do anything?!
How did I take myself to bring-
another problem at your feet.
You should be,
by all rights,
on the verge of suicide.

Do you have any last words noted in a log?
Are you running away again
or just going for a "jog"?
Take me with you,
I'll play the loyal dog at your side.
She put seashells over his eyes.
She buried him in sand and shingles.
Waited for the high tide.
And that's how the widow
officially became single.


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soona15 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2016  Student General Artist
Thank you for the fav on My Angel Flew :heart:
Otakuu4lyphe Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
my pleasure~Wink/Razz 
Mellodee Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016   Digital Artist
Thank you for the fave! :)
Otakuu4lyphe Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016
Llama Love ur welcome and thank you 4 the llama!Heart 
Mellodee Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2016   Digital Artist
welcome! :)
LadyMintLeaf Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2016   General Artist
Thank you so much for the :+fav:!!:D
Otakuu4lyphe Featured By Owner Edited Jul 11, 2016
5 seconds hug <you're welcome Sam is gorgeous btw!)
LadyMintLeaf Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016   General Artist
:) :hug:
Samnosca Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for the fav, i appreciate it!
Silka-MLFT Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
THXS for adding "Vanishing" and "My World" to your favs!! :la: :hug: 
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